just a simple boat

Photography \ Nature | 12/28/07 @017 | flyhart | critiques (12) | views (292)

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hey folks!

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I was walking with my eos 400D near my house. i was taking picture's on a bridge. An I saw this cute little boat. Fully zoomed with my sigma 18-200 I shot 7 pictures. from unsharp till this.

I've changed this a bit in Photoshop CS2. I got some very good help
I want to thank Matthijs { http://meandmycam.gfxartist.com) lot!! He's my new guide and friend. He helped me edit this post in photoshop, and i've learned a lot!!

C&C are welcome ofcourse!

p.s. please take a look at the full version, the purple gfxcolour makes it a bit weird

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Daykan

12/28/07 @038

Very nice!!! Love the colors! Nice composition too!

purplerose

12/28/07 @132

nice tones.

RvascoF

12/28/07 @525

Nice compo but a lower angle would be better...!!

gencosman

12/28/07 @529

Nice comp.

MeAndMyCam

12/28/07 @682

I agree with you that the colours look a bit odd against the GFX-background. Timeless pic, good study-object

Vasco

12/28/07 @684

Sorry, the simple boat is ok with me, a lower angle would be better, but this is fine, the composition is good, but the detail... I would like to see more detail, something really focused. I believe that and eos 400 can do much better than this regarding image quality.

flyhart

12/28/07 @695

Vasco, you're right.. but I'm still learning how to deal with manual focus and stuff. I really find it hard to decide when something is réally focused. But putting it on automatic, mwa I find it to easy to do!

Thanks you all for commenting

Roadrunner

12/28/07 @741

Good object. I agree about lower angle, and sharpness.
Pick this boat from another angle. The vegetation you don't need. Go abstractish.

Madanapale

12/28/07 @770

Nice composition!
Carlos

moserArtist

12/28/07 @775

Lower angle is needed indeed!

blackshad

01/01/08 @598

lower angle might be better indeed
nice picture overall

danheacock

01/05/08 @149

Very cool boat! I like what you have done here Jos, although I can see a lot of things you might be able to do with this. The first that comes to mind is a long exposure black and white shot, somewhat high key. There is a great photographer that does these shots well. Here is the link to his work and I think maybe this boat and wood structure would work well with that style.

http://www.gerardlaurenceau.com/

Also, you may want to try some different angles and include a little more water in your shot. It seems a little "zoomed" in with this composition, which is nice, but I think a wider angle would work even better. Hope these comments help!

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